Blog 13 Introduction Pitches

First Idea; Explain fear & define.

Second Idea; Start off with factual information and analyze it. With the analysis I will incorporate it with my claim. 


Blog 13 Essays & Grades

I believe all the essays deserve the grade of B to an A. I do not think that UNIV 200 is an easy class by any means. I just feel like anyone that can sit and construct sixteen pages of information and research information deserves credit for trying. And what about effort? People’s writing style may be different but what I take from an essay may be completely different from the person who wrote it and someone else who will read it other than me. 

Book Banning-90;  a lot of sources which led to  lot of information

Achievement Gap-92 it was a lot of factual information which isn’t bad but I would have liked the authors opinion more.

Avian Intelligence-95; VERY organized but it was very boring. Your topic has a lot to do with whether  your audience will be more willing to read your paper. 

Blog 12 Official Research Question

How does being a heterosexual male vs a homosexual male change the dynamic of shame and fear when they are raped?

The connection I have mainly made through my sources is that men rape is very brutal and the fear dynamic doesn’t change from sexual orientation types or gender. 


Two Potential Titles

Dynamic of Fear

Rape: The Unspoken Fear